Today people are surrounded by all kinds of advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Advertising is indeed widespread these days, from TV commercials, radio ads, newspapers, magazines and even on the Internet such as in YouTube and Facebook. I strongly agree that it greatly affects consumers’ judgment, however, I beg to disagree that it only has a negative impact on their lives. While advertising may sometimes be deceiving and confusing, it is still generally helpful for it makes the consumers aware of the brand, provides information about different products, and helps them weigh the benefits.
Through the help of advertising, consumers gain knowledge about the existence of different products. As the awareness of people increases, the number of competitors also increases and that affects the pricing of products oftentimes in favor of the consumers. Another positive impact on people’s lives of advertising is having an informed mind. As consumers watch and listen to different advertisements, they obtain information in a relatively short span of time. However, if they wish to learn more about a particular product or service, some advertisements also provide contact details in case customers desire to make inquiries.
The most important contribution of advertising to the public is their ability to weigh benefits and make the right decision. Since consumers are now aware of the existence of the products and the information, they are now capable of choosing the product that best meets their needs and requirements. However, in doing this, consumers have to make sure that all the details they got are factual and reliable and this depends on their natural ability to judge things.
In conclusion, unlike what most people think, advertising is not an all-deceiving and confusing monster that disturbs the human mind. As a matter of fact, it is helpful in increasing the people’s awareness of various products available for their consumption, providing information about them, and weighing the benefits in order to make the right choice. The possible risk which advertising poses is less serious than the benefits it brings to the public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, while, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4250764526 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05916495357 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556574923547 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5983018601 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.714285714 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179803600403 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645922930312 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743690220328 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105642086114 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381955553029 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.