Today people are traveling more than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of traveling for the traveler?
Due to the affordable price for plane tickets, more and more people have travelled domestically or internationally. The obvious merit of this is to reduce-stress levels.
Human beings are able to travel to other places because of inexpensive airline fares, encouraging people to take more trips. That is to say, there are various numbers of airplanes offering to fly to most wanted tourism destinations in domestic and overseas with budget-prices, so this stimulates people to go there. Taking both Air Asia and Lion Air as the example, these companies give sensational promotions for travellers wanting to trip to Bali such as 50% discount for returned tickets. As a result, many citizens from other areas are able to purchase the tickets to come to the dream island.
Obviously, the immense benefit for travellers traveling to the favorable places is being stress-free, improving mental health. This is because most tourist places offer breathtaking views like pristine water and soft white sand that make visitors feel comfortable and forget temporarily about their demanding jobs. Evidence shows the majority of beach lovers coming back from recreation and starting to work the following day feel compelled, since the beach provides slow waves and relaxed atmosphere. Undoubtedly, by experiencing those activities, working people could relieve stress.
To sum up, budget-airline tickets are able to encourage people to travel, and the advantage of travelling is to be able to make them relaxed. If possible, every worker is supposed to experience holidays in other regions in order to have work-life balance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, such as, as a result, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41106719368 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95188387262 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667984189723 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1699603457 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.083333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289005586148 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10214100047 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102431245997 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186421558812 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417886539383 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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