Today, people can work and live in anywhere they want, because of the improvement of communication technology and transport. Do advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Technology and transport facilities have been improving because of excellent research of science. It is irrefutable that because of advantages in telecommunication technology and travel, today’s person can stay and do activity in any part of the globe. I tend to believe that it has more fruitful outcomes than being disadvantages and the reason for why I believe so is analysed further.
The most obvious merit as per my understanding is that technology plays main role as time saver in mankind’s life. Explaining it, if clients of any company are at remote location, however, company’s worker can be in contact of them and do work as per their requirement with the help of latest gadget like mobile phone, laptop and so on. Furthermore, revenue of any person or company can be incline because any one do not need to travel to catch customer for business purposes. Moreover, a person who live far from their family have chance to do video calling or audio calling for conversation with them.
To add the mention benefits, fearless and safe travelling lead to result of less accident. It is helpful to be safe for every human. Additionally, reduction of cost is key advantages of travelling in this decade. Any citizen can easily travel in affordable ticket of public vehicles .People can travel in all around world with cheaper rate of flight. Before few decades, it was not possible to visit oversea but, after invention of high demanding vehicles like plane, helicopter , it become easy.
However, I would not overlook the darker side. People has became more dependent on technology. Machine can never be reliable totally. If any system or network get fail , may become cause of huge predicament. For example, if engine of plane stop working in the air, all passenger might be seen their self in big trouble. In addition, it possible that data can be stolen during banking transaction because of lack cyber security.
To conclude, people have great opportunity to do work remotely. They can far from their workplace but get it easily using good travel facility. Thus, there are more positive point of technology than negative one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 294, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
... as per their requirement with the help of latest gadget like mobile phone, laptop and so...
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Line 2, column 417, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...erson or company can be incline because any one do not need to travel to catch customer...
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... in affordable ticket of public vehicles .People can travel in all around world wi...
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Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: People
...n affordable ticket of public vehicles .People can travel in all around world with che...
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Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...emanding vehicles like plane, helicopter , it become easy. However, I would not ...
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Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...ng vehicles like plane, helicopter , it become easy. However, I would not overlook t...
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Line 4, column 59, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...ot overlook the darker side. People has became more dependent on technology. Machine c...
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Line 4, column 168, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tally. If any system or network get fail , may become cause of huge predicament. F...
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Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... point of technology than negative one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04201680672 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84549899832 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616246498599 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6542760886 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7142857143 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09523809524 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227496283798 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606466922195 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557386801118 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128073280177 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591018817253 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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