Today, prison is the most common solution for crime. However, the more effective solution is to provide people with better education so that they do not become ciminals.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Giving people education in order not to become an offender is the better solution than sending them to prison is now one of the controversial issues that people like debating about. Some people say that prison is quite effective for crime, others say that good quality of education helps people more not to commit a crime. In my opinion, I completely agree that better education has more benefits than the prison system.
To begin with, It is undeniable that sending offenders to jail is in common since a very long time ago. However, there are some limitations because this concept is more like a punishment than prevention. For example, If a criminal kill people and nobody catch that person, the criminal will not get any punishments even though the case happened. Furthermore, it exerts only a short-term influence on them. Because the prison system cannot touch their heart. We have seen many cases through the mass media such as the internet, TV and newspapers that people who had been in prison commit a crime again or avenged.
To solve these problems, government or small parts of society such as schools, organizations and home should give people a better education since young generations. According to researches, most of the criminals had severe memories or did not get proper educations when they were young. In addition, one of the significant role in education is spending fewer society costs. By prevent many crimes before it happened, we can save human and physical resources.
In conclusion, while some people believe that serving in jail is still the most effective method, I strongly believe that crime prevention by teaching is the most reasonable way in modern society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'nobody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'catches'.
Suggestion: catches
...e, If a criminal kill people and nobody catch that person, the criminal will not get ...
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Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ts only a short-term influence on them. Because the prison system cannot touch their he...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, still, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04255319149 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64708177042 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7808845354 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.571428571 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268107228362 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07809662667 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587294086282 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148934760842 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814601523181 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.