Today’s food travels thousands of miles before it reaches customers.
Why is this? Is this a positive or negative trend?
Nowadays, importing food is very important for all people and countries. This essay will discuss why it is necessary and is it positive or negative issue.
Firstly, the reasons of food trade is the lack of food in some regions, for example, banana grows in Somalia and it is not available in some countries such as Saudi Arabia, so people there need it despite of transfer it through the sea. In addition, importing food is a very important and useful for poor people around the world especially when some people decide to make donation for unfortunate people. As a result, it will help to outweigh the hunger in poor countries.
Secondly, food trade is useful as people can visit another parts of the world and they will deal with different culture and traditions and learn new languages. To illustrate, my uncle has a farm in Syria and every season he travel to Turkey to export olive oil, so now he can speak Turkish language fluently and learned a lot about the Turkish culture and foods. Therefore, I believe it is a wonderful experience to travel to different places through the trading journey.
However, food transportation has many benefits there are some drawbacks. To begin with, high cost of transferring food to far countries, storage the food for long period of time, and encourage people to consume foreign food more than local food. All of these factors will affect the economy of the country since people will demand more on the imported food and local farmers will pay the expense.
To conclude, I strongly argue that importing food is necessary and important for all people around the world. I think it is serious that all governments and individuals must innovate a new ways to transfer food to poor countries, but also they should not forget the importance of local food.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'i think', 'in addition', 'such as', 'as a result', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247787610619 0.247107548796 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.138643067847 0.15552993741 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.094395280236 0.0946569551029 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.047197640118 0.0437536398559 108% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109144542773 0.122223957237 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0147492625369 0.0403219363162 37% => More participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.56395657843 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0383480825959 0.0326786765898 117% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0973451327434 0.0861751148067 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0294985250737 0.0214082191602 138% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00589970501475 0.0119246538136 49% => More subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, whom, Whose, That.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1848.0 1933.38276553 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 316.052104208 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96129032258 6.10592293882 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20519365927 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.346278317152 0.37474360046 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252427184466 0.284197041944 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171521035599 0.203843217982 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.113268608414 0.137313986986 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56395657843 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533980582524 0.560935902166 95% => OK
Word variations: 55.2101501737 60.7401812628 91% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0911823647 81% => OK
Sentence length: 23.7692307692 20.7725350517 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9388393343 49.5273876611 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6086956522 93.4120437189 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4751552795 15.2821509519 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.645962732919 0.594174754866 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.39078156313 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01102204409 160% => OK
Readability: 49.0119492158 49.1922392462 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.55555555556 1.69127372897 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.201603736329 0.332604825255 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.130015610857 0.102734651613 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0614930403332 0.0668474354756 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.633275198177 0.534917948617 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15181354758 0.148666948902 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103829122748 0.13441755203 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101232854289 0.0742828286743 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.321786101169 0.324241079732 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0320798559997 0.0640056729886 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160970284828 0.22793763319 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106400451797 0.0582452615562 183% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41883767535 29% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.88977955912 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.60220440882 154% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.00200400802 50% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.493987976 105% => OK
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Rates: 70.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 6.5 Out of 9