Thanks to the internet and social networks, people can easily travel to any countries and explore that place by watching videos and photos. So that, more and more people are attracted by foreign culture, language and especially food that they have not experienced before. This is the reason why food travels thousands of miles before it reaches customers in other countries. In my point of view, this trend is both positive and negative.
To discuss the negative face of this trend, we can realize that teenagers and even adults tend to feel interested in foreign food instead of local food. It is the fact that people can pay half of their salary per month to enjoy traditional food of other countries while they can choose to eat local food with lower price and save a huge of money. However, food are storage in a long period may lose a variety of nutritional value and do not keep resemble taste like the fresh one. This trend also has serious effect on country's economy because of decreasing the use of local food products. It makes farmers lose their job because the products do not be consumed and become inventory. Moreover, food companies will have to face with bankrupt if they can not sell products and do not have money to pay for workers.
On the other face of this trend, it also bring positive effects not only to people but also to the Government and country. In modern society, people have more conditions to travel abroad than in the past, but not for all. It will be more convenient for someone, who want to explore different cultures but do not have opportunity and financial ability, when they can travel by foreign food in their own country. Partly because of the specific climate conditions of each country, they can not produce some kinds of food to serve people's needs. So that the demand for importing food from other countries has appeared and food travels thousands of miles before it reaches customers. In addition, big countries want to provide food for developing countries to help to eradicate hunger, reduct poverty and decrease economic burden.
In conclusion, every problems always have two faces and does this trend. it is inconclusive whether we say that this trend is positive or negative because it not only affects badly but also brings lots of benefits. The matter is the Government should find solution to balance the use between local food and foreign food, also control the percentage of importing food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2039.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 422.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8317535545 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41395232593 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504739336493 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7832637526 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.315789474 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2105263158 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331105492391 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116434427098 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116813811585 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230041174352 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643382900428 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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