The more society develops the more problems people have to face with, especially widen knowledge to be adapted for modern society. One of the most important things is foreign language, which people try hard and spend lots of money to learn, rooted from the globalization. However, some people think that the ability to learn more than one language will be less important in the future. In my point of view, this opinion is not logic and I do not agree.
First and foremost, foreign language is taught from primary school is not without reason. This is an reasonable demand that people have to learn foreign language to not only heighten knowledge but also help to have more job opportunities. Nowadays, all recruiters require candidates with higher qualities, such as: major knowledge, soft skills and also foreign language. How can people find a job with high salary and good environment without fluency in one or two foreign languages?
Learning foreign language just brings advantages for us and makes our life becomes better.
Second, the demand to travel or work in other countries is increasing fastly in recent years. People will feel more confident when working or communicating in other countries if they can speak the official language there. People also have chance to learn about different cultures, histories and culinary arts as long as they are attracted. It will help us to avoid being shock if we go to other countries without family, friends or acquaintance. It will be easier for us to read books or watches TV in different language in some necessary situations.
In conclusion, there is no reason for people not to continue to learn foreign languages. It not only helps us to widen knowledge with diversity information, but also brings valuable opportunities to makes our life be better.
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- Today’s food travels thousands of miles before it reaches customers. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative trend? 73
- Because people increasingly eat at restaurant, all restaurants should be required to display nutritional information about the meals they serve. This knowledge makes it easier for diners to make healthy choices and reduces the risk of diet related health 50
- Because people increasingly eat at restaurant, all restaurants should be required to display nutritional information about the meals they serve. This knowledge makes it easier for diners to make healthy choices and reduces the risk of diet related health 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03986710963 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69365361616 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564784053156 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.9701502043 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.8125 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277639094841 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960409035508 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130361438704 0.0667982634062 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14883752682 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121801568582 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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