The proliferation of private institutes has significantly contributed to the increasing number of scientific research, which used to be exclusively conducted by the governments. Despite some drawbacks, I think this phenomenon should be promoted as it has helped the world gain extraordinary achievements in almost all fields of science.
How to control private companies is probably the biggest problem that many people are worried about. The world has witnessed numerous catastrophes, ranging from environmental disasters to moral distress, caused by nongovernmental firms. Without rigorous supervision, scientific activities such as human genetic modifications or developing perilous weapons can be carried out illegally by private organizations. For this reason, some people think it will be safer and more reliable for the government to have the monopoly on scientific exercises.
However, the irresistible outcomes brought by private enterprises has suggested that we should encourage those companies to devote more time and efforts to science instead of prohibiting them. It is true that thousands of inventions by technological giants such as Microsoft Inc. or Apple Inc. have positively changed the way we live and communicate. Besides, the structures of private businesses are often more flexible and less bureaucratic than those of state-owned ones, hence quicker and more effective procedures for urgent incidents. In fact, the promising Covid-19 vaccines, which have been developed within more than one year by independent entrepreneurs like Pfizer or BioNTech, might be used on human safely while the normal process for a vaccine can take nearly a decade.
All in all, I believe that it is more beneficial for all of us to allow private companies to do scientific research. However, we should ensure that all experiments are legal and strictly monitored by the government.
- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents an 36
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.Why is this the case?What can be done about this problem? 73
- Many people use written language in a less formal way and in a relaxed way than in the past Why is that so Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages 78
- Some people think that schools should choose students according to their academic abilities while others think it is better to have students of different abilities studying together Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 63, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that it is more beneficial for all of us to allow private companies to do scienti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, so, while, i think, in fact, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64912280702 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22707078351 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621052631579 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4119780839 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214526787687 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062242774557 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574115784231 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12755276438 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02937834752 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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