Today, there is insufficient respect to the elderly by the younger individuals. What do you think are the reasons? What are its effects to the society?
At current times, traditional values seems to be given less importance especially by the younger generation. One of the said values is paying respect to older people which is now less observed. There are possible reasons why this particular humane aspect is seen as disvalued by children.
Admittedly, environmental influences in the upbringing of children play a major role to individual attitudes and behaviors. Parents are viewed as the first teachers so these persons are expected to inculcate values education to their offspring such as giving respect, helping other people, and distinguishing right from wrong. However, as there are more teenage pregnancies nowadays, the preparation to parenthood is not usually met. As a result, these teenage parents may not be able to teach their children about the aforementioned values. In addition, early exposure to the usage of technological gadgets such as mobile phones, laptops, and computers bring impact as to how a child view the world. For instance, unguided video streaming online which shows jokes and humors concerning the elderly could be entertaining to children but can affect their thoughts regarding the aged people as a child grows up. Distorted perspective regarding elderly could be carried upon such as "It is okay to make fond of grandparents" which leads to disrespectful attitude.
Given these reasons, these children will soon become mature members of the society. As this generation is composed of disrespectful and inconsiderate people, elderly might be viewed as useless and dysfunctional people of the community.
This bothersome issue is somehow, needs to be address. Since parents has a crucial role in the molding of children to be a good individual person as a whole, these people should be responsible enough to become parents. This can be done by showing parental support and guidance through spedning more time to children during developmental stage so that good manners as in the case of respecting the older people can be taught and practice. Additionally, parents should regulate the use of gadgets to their children to ensure that contents are appropriate for the viewer's age. This can be done by giving feedbacks to video content in order for the child to know rightful actions from those unacceptable to the society's norms.
To conclude, environmental influences such as the lack of parental teaching and guidance and exposure to technological contents online contribute to children seen as having little respect to the aged population. This will in turn, makes up a society a full of disrespectful and inconsiderate citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, may, regarding, so, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2222.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35421686747 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05596323733 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530120481928 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 694.8 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5366602952 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.947368421 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8421052632 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0598397335939 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0196991891585 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0181393431369 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0392394071093 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015739970089 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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