TOPIC 2 : With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good forward step while others do not. What are the positive and negative effects of this trend ?
Humans are living in the 4.0 era so e-books based on technology are increasing nowadays lead to the number of people choosing traditional books is declining. Instead of arguing this is a good forward tendency, some people claim the reverse. From my perspective, this trend has both positive and negative effects.
On the one hand, the rise of e-books offers considerable disadvantages for specific people and caused diseases. Firstly, e-books are not suitable for some groups such as disabled people or the poor. For instance, it can be seen that having an electronic device laptop or mobile phone with high prices is impossible for people in needy areas so they can not approach this kind of modern book. Secondly, if reading e-books for a long time, readers have to emit blue lights from the screens which led to health problems. For example, the number of electric device users facing some eye disorders such as myopic, astigmatism is growing and they also stress after excessive time for reading purposes.
On the second hand, e-books play a virtual role in human daily life because of their convenience and modern. First of all, the biggest merit of e-books is the information stored in a small phone or tablet and users can carry it conveniently. To be more specific, a lot of stories, films, audiobooks are saved under e-books platforms and having more spaces for readers without many hardcover books when they doing daily activities. Therefore, not only the storage data, but this kind of book also has clear display and stories divided into categories which friendly for users. As a consequence, e-books had widely followed by people, especially youngsters so e-books will develop quickly in the future with satisfaction.
To sum up, e-books have both merits and demerits for people using this platform. E-books can stock a huge amount of data and user-friendly but they also are a challenge for some groups of people and caused diseases. From my point of view, readers should balance traditional paper books and electronic books to create flexible methods for reading.
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- TOPIC 2 With the rise of e books comes the decline in paper books Some people see this as a good forward step while others do not What are the positive and negative effects of this trend 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0523255814 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61234846859 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587209302326 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7397945013 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.625 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296856533373 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11338366701 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516867065425 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212142010308 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622497525527 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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