Topic: Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant example if necessary.
It is often argued that it is more advantageous to gain an occupation along with huge wage than the satisfaction of job because humans need more income to meet their demand in the developed world. I completely disagree with this point of view.
In my opinion, it is rather easy to understand the reason behind when the citizens choose an employment with a big salary, partly becasue people are living under constant pressure in terms of money issues. Consequently, those pressure is the driving force behind this phenomenon. Nevertheless, working more than average eight hours per day in the workplace and spending money on the rest of day with a comfortable budget, humans regularly tend to rush their aim in stuffy work condition when it is not a turn on to them. Moreover, the employee’s attitude towards job and how efficient their performance will be are far more crucial to contribute to the sustainable success and themselves.
Additionally, the indispensable benefit of job satisfaction bring to every individual and organization is that a growing number of achievements when the workers work with passion and determination. It is widely believed that worked in fully energy environment, people will gain more than expectation in terms of relationships, self-development. For example, a Vietnamese employee of Google has dropped out his job and decided to follow the tough progress of start-up business module. Although, working in international environment with wealth salary and well-qualified partners, he also want to pursue his target to challenge himself as well as enjoy job satisfaction, which are necessary elements to push the growth of development. By choosing a job which we are dreamed, we will live up our enjoyment.
In conclusion, individual has own right to make decision and pick up an occupation to stick with the future. Above all, we should be more gritty and keep ourselves motivated for the long run with long-term goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19242902208 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15535636989 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611987381703 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9319164489 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.615384615 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128293468184 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424501509088 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028331912936 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764855171973 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366679386979 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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