Topic: Computer have been widely used in our daily life. How important is the computer in the development of modern society?
The 21st century has witnessed the born of many greatest technological inventions. Due to them, people lead to a happier and easier life. Especially, It is a computer, a symbol of modern society, has come into wide use and made a significant contribution to humanity.
There is no denying that computer is a powerful instrument of calculation. Take calculating by hand as an example, it is a time - consuming and painstaking work, however, the computer that was invented to simplify this task. All the calculations, how matter they are complicated, are easily solved with the incredible speed and generally reliable.
It is also known that the computer as a perfect communication device has brought to human much benefit. For example, the computer meets the people's need which is the remote communication, two people from two different countries can communicate although they are so far.
However, It is quite true that the use of computers has its drawbacks as well as merits. It can tell on your health, cause eye - related diseases if people do not use the reasonable time to surf the Net.
In conclusion, it is not exaggerated to say that the computer is an important invention in a hundred years. If people make positive use of it, it will make our life more convenient, this leads to increased life quality.
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- Topic: Computer have been widely used in our daily life. How important is the computer in the development of modern society? 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92792792793 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00062440356 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635135135135 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9800859831 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249847972712 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792965820909 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044747685265 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121352640467 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384734382286 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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