Topic: Every day, millions of tons of food are wasted all over the world. Why do you think this is happening? And how can we solve this problem?
Food is one of important demand that help people survive. However, it is true that a huge amount of food are thrown away every day. This essay will look at the reasons for this problem and propose some solutions to mitigate it.
The primary cause of the problem is the low quality of storage methods that lead to spoilage of food. Take the way people store fruits and vegetable during transport in some developing nations as an example, people often use plastic sacks that result in squashing phenomenon. Hence, before consumption, all of them go bad and should be thrown away. Another problem is the price of food products is low nowadays. Many people, therefore, can easily buy a great deal of food to satisfy their hungry stomach. However, they sometimes buy food greater than their demand and the consequence is they will waste the remaining food.
One way to solve this problem is to improve preservation strategies. Using plastic crates, for example, instead of plastic sacks can prevent transportation damage and cut down on that waste or using plastic wrap to cover remaining food before putting in the fridge. To cut back on food waste, people should learn to become smart buyers. They should plan what really need before going shopping to avoid impulse buys. This way, people can easily choose, shop for and prepare meals. Not only do they contribute to food waste reduction but they also save their money and time.
In conclusion, waste food is an alarming issue in over the world. People should apply some practical solutions which are to improve the preservation way or learn to become a sharp purchaser to combat it. I think failure to tackle this problem will lead to it escalating out of control, so people must prevent it from now.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, look, really, so, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84053156146 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39187430302 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56146179402 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1269808229 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9444444444 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237780297231 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769858350893 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537284459898 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152774386279 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275525720653 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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