Topic: Everyone should become vegetarian because they don not need to eat to have healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
Vegetarianism has evolved as a noticeable topic consideration among society. There exists a common belief that having vegetarian diet is better for health than eating meat. While I agree with that point of view, I believe that taking a balance diet between vegetables and meat is a greater choice.
On the one hand, there are ranges of benefits encouraging people to choose vegetarian diet. Vegetables and fruits play as crucial supplement of many essential vitamins and fiber to nourish our body. They also contain abundant of calories which can convert into energy to serve our activities all day. Moreover, without holding cholesterol, people can freely eat but get any anxiety about overweight or obesity. It’s really a healthy choice to be vegetarians.
On the other hand, it’s not an efficient meal without any meat. First in reality, consuming much of vegetables make your body lack of numerous vital vitamins like B6, B12, … and minerals, which is major elements in maintaining blood circulation as well as boosting immune system and resistance of body, more important that it’s only available in meat. Second, despite some harmful effects of over consuming meat, in some case, eating meat is also necessary. For example, children need more animal protein when growing up or more calcium to strengthen their bonds and teeth, which only provide by pork, eggs, fish, lamb, etc… Besides, the calories come from meat supplied more than those are taken from vegetables. So, we cannot totally delete meat out of daily diet.
To conclusion, vegetarianism also help us get into healthy eating lifestyle, but we should not completely stop consuming meat. Put a moderation in eating vegetables and meats will be an appropriate diet plan to protect our health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, really, second, so, then, well, while, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22996515679 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68469555708 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668989547038 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0963606327 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.066666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156571301743 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565647327779 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048494524353 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112597259772 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593972392512 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.