Topic: Some people believe that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the era of modern society, more and more complicated crimes have appeared frequently with numerous severe consequences. When it comes to the main root causes that trigger such illegal behaviors, some people suppose that this status is a consequence of social factors or their personal characteristics. This essay will shed light on both viewpoints before making a final decision.
One major ground behind the reason why people believe that a bad personality leads to criminal actions is that many criminal cases are triggered by an inherent mindset. In fact, humans require long-term development to grow comprehensively in terms of mindset and perception. During this growing journey, humans will get exposure to various experiences as well as interact with different people. If they connect with bad people, they are likely to be adversely affected, leading to immature thoughts and impulsive behaviors such as stealing or cheating, particularly teenagers. In fact, various factors such as upbringing, personal beliefs, and psychological disorders may all play a role in criminal activities. In addition, there are several cases in which people commit a crime due to being influenced by mental health disorders such as sociopathy or psychopathy.
On the flip side, social issues are also taken into consideration when researching about primary causes that incline people to commit crimes. Although in the realm of modern society, living standards have been enhanced in every aspect of life, there are a considerable number of residents who still cannot get access to basic amenities such as healthcare services or even suffer from insufficiency of food and water scarcity. As a result, poverty citizens are being put on the verge of deprivation, and have to break the laws as a means of survival. Furthermore, other social factors such as discrimination, inequality, and corruption may promote crime through fostering an environment of dissatisfaction and rage. Those people might hold a belief that society is always unequal and hard to struggle with, thereby inclining to turn to illegal behaviors as a form of protest.
In conclusion, aside from personal psychological factors, I contend that social difficulties are key elements contributing to the surge in crime rates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, still, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43258426966 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05885334148 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620786516854 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0029134859 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.933333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7333333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180971025609 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528323329543 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401589232022 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105715507215 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127032936947 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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