Topic: Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, humans have to work harder and harder in order to keep pace with the rapid development of technology. Therefore, it is necessary for us to seek various forms of entertainment to escape from the hustle and bustle, including music. I am an advocate of the idea that people with diverse cultures and ages can get closer thanks to music.
The first and foremost compelling reason for me to completely support the aforementioned idea is that music is a means of conveying introverted people’s thoughts. Hence, people around them especially their dearest and nearest can understand and relate to them, which might seem impossible in conventional contexts and without music. As a result, once they can see eye-to-eye with such people, the age gap ore different cultures is not a matter anymore. For example, some introverted teenagers might struggle with sharing and confessing with their parents, which can cause a big barrier named age gap.
In addition, it is not an exaggeration to say it is such a big chance for music lovers to broaden their horizons and derive knowledge from international music songs. In other words, when they immerse in those rhythms, they can relate and get to know other cultures much faster compared to other conventional ways. For instance, a range of Michael Jackson’s songs are highly valued by listeners across many countries due to their high moral value and the possibility to link people together.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that music can have the power to connect people with a diversity of ages and cultures. Furthermore, life will become far tedious without music.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06273062731 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78303160358 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60147601476 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9295333503 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187474276224 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715797411713 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448421966348 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119562586095 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020981652809 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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