Topic: Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others however, believe that school is the place to learn this
The number of car accidents is increasing nowadays.What are causes and effects os this issue on society?
recent days, there are a lot of traffic incidents are take place all around the world.this is a trend which is having devastating effect on society.this essay is aimed at analyzing the causes and possible outcomes of increase the number of accidents.
One of the reasons for this trend is enthusiasm of drivers.In fact, some drivers exceed speed limit because they want to compete with other drivers.Especially, young men drivers tend to drive car fast and in this situation it is difficult for them to drive car. that is why accidents are unavoidable.Another contribution to this trend is increase in the number of women drivers . it has been confirmed that women are more sensible than men because when they drive car, they are seriously anxious and this causes accidents.
Major effects of this trend is entirely negative.One of the negative effects is death of people.As a result of accidents, a lot of people die or get injured.Moreover, this causes financial problems for people bacuse not only, people but also cars are damaged and people should spend money to repair cars . Therefore, this negatively affects people's budget.
Following this look at the causes and effects of the recent tendency, it is felt that death of people and financial problems are the important counter to this problem.Thus,it is hoped government will take some measures in an effort to prevent this disturbing trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12955465587 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03774314603 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550607287449 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.1291665682 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.375 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.875 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142506023967 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671043671987 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354863192029 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773917584204 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389000435069 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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