Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for the economy.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.
The tourism have been become the prime component of the economy in many developing countries. Some individuals hold the view that due to significant rose in tourism in last 5 decades which ended up with adverse consequence to the local citizens and environment. While, few argues that economy is maintain because of it.
One of the principle benefits of tourism is to economy of the nation and also to local people as it increasing their job opportunity. In other words, the local citizen which leave nearer to the tourist place have more knowledge about that place and can become guild for foreign people. Moreover, business like motels and shops also get benefited by more travelers will stay in motels and rise in sell of their goods respectively.To exemplify, the Kutch, the tourist place of Gujarat, the native resident's standard of living has rose to certain extend compare to earlier time because of increase in their business. In short, tourism sector has valuable role in economy of countries.
However, the two prominent drawbacks of tourism which have adverse impact on native residents and environment. Firstly it cause overcrowding which end ups in traffic jam. In addition, due to these local inhabitants suffer a lot in punctuality as they have to be on time to their work places. Secondly, the travelers who visiting the tourist places, use private mean of transport, which lead more fossil fuel burning so result in more toxic gases in environment. For instance, many countries have noticed, the tourist sites have more toxin in their environment rather then non-tourist places.
In my opinion, I believe that tourism has greatly damage the environment and people life because of above mention reasons.
In recapitulation, Even though tourism help to build economy of the nation, it's devastating effect on nature and local citizen cannot be overlooked
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- Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment However others claim that it is good for the economy Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16721311475 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74069729464 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570491803279 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7359235349 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22875239825 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082206429931 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436662791173 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122186414957 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266018923722 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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