Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries and contributes a great deal to economies around the world. However, the damage tourism can cause to local cultures and the environment is often ignored.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Traveling around the world can be quite convenient in this globalized world. We can go to other countries to experience their cultures and taste the local foods that cannot be found in our hometown. However, I think as we travel to other places, it is also our responsibility to be aware of the local cultures and environments.
Certainly, tourism industry is the one of the most important income for some countries. They relies on tourists who comes to travel each year. They introduce their local customs and sell cuisines to make money for living, and because of this, I think sometime the environments or the cultures are damaged not only by tourists but also by the local people. For instance, in Taiwan, there are some local sky lantern sellers would sell the lanterns made of cheaper materials, which this could cause fires in the forest where these sky lanterns land.
On the other hand, tourists are the another factor for the matter. Some of them will forget the importance of maintaining cultures and environments. They leave rubbishes at the beaches, mountains, and lakes, or refuse to follow the rules because they don’t want to. Some traditional activities which have been holding many years would possibly be cancelled or transformed (which lost their original values) in order to please these travelers. They often forget the reason why they come to visit in the first place, which it is supposed to be experiencing the culture and the environment.
Although the industries have contributed to the economies for many countries, I think for both sides of tourists and the local people should all pay more attentions on maintaining the local cultures and environments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'rely'
Suggestion: rely
...portant income for some countries. They relies on tourists who comes to travel each ye...
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Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sformed which lost their original values in order to please these travelers. They...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so, for instance, i think, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05714285714 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71635259651 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567857142857 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4723287395 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.923076923 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158822640856 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564102262589 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497290873361 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982747357067 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039522710115 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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