Regardless of the positive and negative effects that tourism industry has on different nations and economies, it has been gaining popularity at a significant speed. However, there is a debate between different mindsets that whether or not the negative effects on environment and culture is neglected. According to my perception, governments are well aware of these problems and trying to find the appropriate solution.
To begin with, those who believe that states are not focusing enough on the repercussions of mass tourism, they believe that till now, government has not implemented any strict policy to monitor the number of tourist traveling to a certain location. As a consequence, not only the natural places bot also the residents of these sites are suffering from many ecological and social problems such as culture loss. For example, due to the lack of attention from authorities around one-fifths of the area of Ranthambore national reserve has been occupied by hotels and cafe shops.
On the flip side, more liberal minded people claim that as the international governments are continuously emphasizing on nature friendly tourism activities such as Eco-tourism, the above blame is completely baseless. Over the years, authorities in developing and developed countries are working to raise the awareness regarding tourism and its effects on environment. As an instance, government of India has initiated ' Be an Eco-tourist ' mission to control the foot marks of travelers on the nature.
To conclude, recent actions devoted to minimizing the tourists` influence on nature clearly suggest that government are not ignoring the negative sides of flourishing tourism industry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, well, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51923076923 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06142974295 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623076923077 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.4110661138 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.5 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120606928616 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448319762221 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030423616771 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681792249962 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171195253669 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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