Traffic and housing problem in major cities could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is universal truth that, traffic congestion and housing nuisances more increase in smart cities as compared to recent years because every year many people come from different village for job. Although, some experts believe that if big industry shift in village then could be solved this problem. In this essay, I am going to become this question from both point of view.
On the one hand, there are numerous reasons now in this era people face to heavy congestion and shortage of accommodation in metro cities. Firstly, if companies and industry establish in countryside then obviously could be reduce the traffic congestion and home. But, might be in smart cities individual overlook the unemployment because majority of people nowadays, depend on practical work. For instance, in India some foreign industry establish the bussiness in countryside with which they contribute to provide more employment along with reduce the number of vehicles in road, with for worker try made the skyscraper buildings where they live with family members.
On the other hand, if all industry establish in country then inhabitants of urban area face more nusiances like unemployment. Secondly, there is no doubt that village side people more prefer to doing work in agriculture field than labour in industry. It is better way that company for own staff in daily routine send to the bus with which people personal vehicle besides they prefer to travel by firm transport. In additionally, if industry establish the home along with workplace then people bicycle and walking through come in workplace.
In conclusion, there are many benefits if industry encourage to employer live in company apartment has brought some advantages like reduce the traffic congestion and provide home for emplpyer
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'do'?
Suggestion: do
...that village side people more prefer to doing work in agriculture field than labour i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24561403509 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64484143403 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.084650565 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.583333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0874247500563 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376146288992 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466179784469 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0543420229457 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387031660508 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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