Traffic congestion is becoming increasingly problematic in major cities. What solution can you suggest to solve the problems?
In recent years, many developed cities such as Shang Hai or New York are beset by a common problem: traffic congestion. This phenomenon might lead to various detrimental effects, and thus certain approaches with the aim to combat it are urgently required.
Firstly, public transportation as well as bicycle are the two greatest measures to alleviate the situation. If there are incentives from the authorities which enhance the quality of public transport like buses or implement the public transport system, the volume of traffic would be reduced. Since urban citizens might feel it is more convenient to use these kind of transport rather than using private vehicle. Likewise, encouragement in using bicycle is also a useful method, which has been applied in many developed countries such as France. Providing rental bicycles with low cost on most streets, this would help regain the space taken by cars when it only carries one or two person.
Another solution is that the government should implements certain taxes on vehicles traveling into and parking in city centers. This money then could be used for the reinvestment in the cities’ infrastructure. As the result, the roads are wider and safer, leading to less traffic accidents, one of the major contributor in traffic jams. In addition, there would also be more parking building for those would still need to use private vehicle. Thus, the street become more spacious. Whilst, this could upset and discourage the car owners, it is an effective way to reduce the use of private cars.
In conclusion, with the incentives from the government and the discouragement of using private vehicles, the goal of solving these problems is achievable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, likewise, so, still, then, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20289855072 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76600002597 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3428697627 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.571428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104425181026 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380766950034 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440284404993 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700719836267 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355448613688 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.