Online Shopping has become a common phenomenon everywhere, especially in western countries and this trend is escalating day by day remarkably. Though it has some benefits, it will adversely ruin both ecosystem and the community. In this essay I will explain the issues which is created by e- shopping in detail.
The first and foremost problem is that in my view is that computer buying will certainly create excessive pollution in the planet rather than in store shopping. This is due to overpackage of products and the improper disposal, which will adversely affect the earth. In other words, when people do any online shopping the product will be packed again and again in order to save from damage and loss. To cite an example, if people buy any electronic gadgets like computer or mobile phone, it can be seen that more bundle of termocol and superior plastic for better delivery. As a result, once reached the product to the customer, they may throw the package rather than dump in a proper waste management. And finally, this behaviour will hugely damage the soil and surroundings.
Another key point is that internet shopping sometimes make a financial crisis in the society especially in unwealthly family who rely on the source of income from their small store business. This means that many people prefer to buy goods and material through computer, the number of small ventures and food corners will be shut down soon because of large shopping through online. Consequently, it will definitely make a burden to impoverished family. For instance, in my country in India, many people find income from their tiny shops like cloth mart and material shops. In this circumstances, those people can not give proper education to their children and even can not buy things and products sometimes due to lack of money.
In conclusion, in this modern world online shopping is an inevitable part of life and it can save time and energy by using website shopping, but at the same time, this trend will indeed destroy not only the society but it also an impact on this beautiful environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94050991501 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5790147965 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56940509915 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1142335004 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.266666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0954986253181 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312873876759 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393527026877 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704417135093 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031600396522 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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