In recent years, many local languages are replaced by international language across the globe. Speaking foreign language is adversely affect the country especially which made social and practical problems in the society. I firmly agree with this statement owing to some well grounded reasons.
To begin with, the culture of the country will die out , when more people prefer to use foreign language. This is because, many culture is based on their local languages. To cite an example, in my country in India, the most of the tribals usually speak their own language during their festival, moreover , the songs which they sing in their own language is very famous and it is a part of their culture too. So it is clear that the the international language can break up the local culture ,which they got from their ancestors.
Another justification is that common usage of abroad language will lead some conflict and misunderstaning between people in the country. This is due to sometimes people may not may not know how to deal international language , and consequently it build some dangerous situation in the family as well as in the society. In addition to this, certain people will create discrimination one another due to emergence of foreign language this time they speak less. As a result, the entire city or region will affect the proper communication significantly.
In conclusion, immense use of foreign language is not only affect the culture but it also ruin the proper inter personnel relationship in that area.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07142857143 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80232780702 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559523809524 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7588375485 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144295842593 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572485503198 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475167784116 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957805511906 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544542442493 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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