The trend of online shopping is increasing. What effect does it have on environment and society
E-shopping is gaining ground in this modern world. Presently, people are more eager to buy products online which increase the demand of online shopping. However, it has also some drawbacks. Here, I, would like to account for the adverse effects of e-shopping on environment and society.
There are several effects on the society. First and foremost, with the coming of online shopping people are becoming extravagant. To justify, on the internet several shopping sites are present which give heavy discounts on the products specially on the festive occasions and also attract people as products are available at reasonable prices. So, people buy things unnecessarily about thinking its need. Besides this, people are buying products online inspite of traditional shopping which is affecting the sale of shopkeepers as recent study concluded that sale of local retailers declined by 40% last year. Thence, retailers are facing a huge loss in business.
Effects of online shopping is not limited to society but also it has a bad impact on environment. To start with, online shopping leads to heap of rubbish. To illustrate, when people order products from internet they are well-packed with several layers of paper or plastic which is a garbage later as people throw this on streets, in water and at several other places this leads to pollution and cause
global warming. Hence, it is not difficult to understand, e-shopping has a harmful imapct on environment.
In conclusion, after having all points into my knowledge, i would like to assert that internet shopping should be done in a limit, if people want to live a healthy and pollution free life.
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The essay got 5.5 because of those warning messages:
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'garbage'.
Suggestion: garbage
...ral layers of paper or plastic which is a garbage later as people throw this on streets, ...
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Line 7, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Global
...s this leads to pollution and cause global warming. Hence, it is not difficult to ...
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Line 9, column 59, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...er having all points into my knowledge, i would like to assert that internet shop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, so, then, well, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17843866171 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70081449132 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579925650558 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 69.8818049757 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20442442566 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806948558504 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728244897176 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113139769121 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496836336155 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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