The trend of online shopping is increasing. What effect does it have on environment and society
Nowadays, more and more people buy something on the internet more than shopping in markets or supermarkets. This essay will show the great benefits and some disadvantages of shopping online that consumers can encounter.
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However, shopping online also brings some drawbacks. Uncontrolled quality is probably the biggest problem when shopping online. buyers do not know the quality of the product which they will buy. it may look good on the internet, but it's just a retouched photo and the quality you receive is low and not like the picture. Another disadvantage is cheat. shops deliver other goods with low value instead of the goods buyers order. In the same way, the buyer receives the faulty item but the store does not agree to refund. Those are all tricks of money. For instance, some "virtual" shops take advantage of payment via credit before receiving goods, not delivery after receiving money.
shopping online have both advantages and disadvantages. people should consider many aspects to buy the goods they like. We believe that e-commerce companies will take strong measures to protect customer interests soon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, for instance, such as, first of all, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77300613497 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.53880293589 2.80592935109 197% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616564417178 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8855956309 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.28 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.04 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118227518834 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380381387165 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570654918916 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692364608565 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376491133551 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.3 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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