Unemployment is getting increasing serious in many countries. Some people think people should be offered only primary education,while others think secondary education is necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the sophisticated era, education play a vital role in human being life. dweller have well co-education in their life and definitely they can be achieve any things in their life.According to me, I am disagree with the statement. There are plethora reason behind it. I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.
Modern world of world information technology. Nowadays,all people are well education in their life. I think that, it is not matter employees are studies in primary eduction and secondary education school.Then, the company only focuss in their work because it is benefits to the profit upsurge day by day.But also,the company are choose the best candidate in the company suitable for job requirements. For instance,company have a good contact to the international company. Moreover, they are benefits to the employers life.
Nevertheless, there is no deyning the fact that today there is more competition boom day by day. There are tough competition one to another adolescent. After
that,nowadays, time is very precious in the life. Therefore, dweller should be perform very well in their company.As well as, they can get good opportunity to achieve all of things in their life. Last but not the least, In my opinion, the poverty people have not money pay the fees.They have study in the primary school.As a result, they have very diligent and obligation in the study.
In summarise, after analysing that issue reckon,In my mind,some people believe that primary and secondary education is indispenabe in their life.The job is very necessary part of human being life. In my point of view, the company could not be see the back ground for the employee because there should be Judgmental only the work. Finally, the campany should be select the best candidate for the company. They could be give the best profit to the company.
- In some countries it is illegal employers to reject job appications on the basis of age criteria .it a positive or negative development. 61
- Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology is now replacing their functions. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 56
- The line graph shows the percentage of people living below poverty line (According to world stamdards)in developing ciuntries for the year 1990 to 2050 67
- All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How it could be tackled? 56
- Despite improvements in vehicle technology,there are still large numbers of road accidents.Explain some of the cause of these accidents,and suggest some measures that could be taken to address the problem. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, i think, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07516339869 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87696241301 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506535947712 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 69.1160234053 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2777777778 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142625846609 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041135004514 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415858794496 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757325582536 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477170405017 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.