universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays，more and more people ask universities to accept equal number of male and female students in every subject.However,I disagree with the idea because it's unreasonable to do that.And I think it's a better choice for universities to accept students by their require.
To start with,whether a student can learn a subject well is mostly decided by his or her brain.As it is known to us all,generally the number of boys who major in economics,chemistry or physics is more than the number of girls in the same subjects.According to many researches,there are many differences between men and women's brains,which leads to the different fields we are good at.In general,men usually have better logical and creative thinking,so universities usually accept more male students in science subjects.However,it doesn't mean that girls don't have any advantages.Comparing with the boys at the same age,most of the girls are always more sensitive and they also have better ability to communicate with others.For those female students，they can major in some arts subjects,such as politics,history,sociology and so on.It's clear that every area needs different talents and talents,so universities should accept students mainly by their grades in a subject,which exactly shows whether they have ability to learn it.By this way,not only the colleges can benefit from it,but can the students make the best use of their own ability.
However,there are also many people who agree with the idea.One of the main reasons may be that they think male and female students should have equal right to get education.They focus on the balance and fairness,but ignore subject requires at the same time.
In summary,for the different advantages male and female students have,there is no need to accept equal number of students in each subject.Colleges should accept students by their own abilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, i think, in general, in summary, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46735395189 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.65830762138 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54295532646 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.2975951904 355% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 391.672375845 49.4020404114 793% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 397.75 106.682146367 373% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.75 20.7667163134 350% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.5 7.06120827912 333% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313900756603 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.248551792337 0.084324248473 295% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927217040756 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248551792337 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927217040756 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.7 13.0946893788 311% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.06 50.2224549098 -20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.5 11.3001002004 288% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.63 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.79 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.1190380762 304% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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