Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some argue that universities should offer equal chances to both men and women in every single subject. I strongly disagree with this view since it is unrealistic and neglects the merits of students.
Having the same number of students is somehow a far-fetched idea. The admission of students at a university depends heavily on the applications they receive for each course. If the officials of university preassign the number of seats in a course by gender, they would need enough applicants of each sex. In reality, one gender is somehow more drawn to certain majors, making it almost impossible to aim for equal proportions. By way of example, it is believed majors such as art and language are more popular among women than men, and if half of the class is dedicated to boys, it will be difficult to fill the class.
Furthermore, students’ talent should be considered as the main yardstick for admission not their gender. Every person is unique with their certain talents and qualifications which makes them suitable prospective students for a specific major. Therefore, universities should continually select students based on the merits they have. For instance, if a female student passes her exams with high grades and shows an outstanding performance in her major, she will definitely be a great fit in the course. So, it is certainly unfair to reject her in favour of the male counterpart only because the number of seats is divided by gender.
Although some may argue educational equality can be achieved thorough halving the proportion of each class and dedicating it to each gender, I believe this measure is near to impossible to achieve and for me the real justice in education means paying close attention to the students’ talents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05841924399 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.819298104 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594501718213 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2022973272 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.230769231 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202311897773 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075813260508 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505831457861 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121473379767 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553079088935 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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