The unlimited use of cars may lead to many problems. What are these problems? In order to reduce these problems, people should be discourage from using cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is universally acknowledged that a immense car usage negatively have negative impact on a range of aspects. There are several kinds of problems can occur, and I believe that the authorities should discourage individuals from using cars.
To begin with, the overwhelming majority of citizens who commute by cars might cause a variety of issues. Firstly, since cars release enormous amount of emission which contain harmful elements, individuals’ health could be destructively affected. For instance, people live in cities which have high incidence of car using ratio have a tendency to get respiratory diseases. Secondly, a lot of cars in a road at the same time is responsible for traffic congestion. This might prevent individuals from being on time and have negative impact on their emotional aspect. Consequently, the productivity of workers could decrease.
As a solution, I would believe that the government should discourage individuals from using cars. First and foremost, a decrease in car usage will reduce emission, thus environment and people’s health are protected. In addition, the authorities do not have to spend more money to upgrade roads system to prevent traffic congrestion. As a result, more resources would be allocated in other crucial sectors such as education system, healthcare system.
In summary, there are several kinds of issues that immense car usage causes, and under no circumstances should individuals deny its negative impacts. Therefore, I would believe that citizens sould be discouraged from unlimited use of cars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in summary, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50826446281 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09897795526 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603305785124 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.0850247422 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.2142857143 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204140633042 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746360468545 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734499821715 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139489060335 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294047107511 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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