The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking is banned in certain place so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extend do you agree or disagree.
It is universal truth that now in this era use the smoking in public place more dangerous for individual, with more create to the horrible aliments like cancer, blood infection and so on. I opine that thus mobile phone as like smoking use in certain place more panic for community. I agree with this statement and discuss both point of view.
On the one hand, there are numerous stunning drawbacks of cellphone use in special place with who people arguthat it's necessary government ought to banned as like cigarette in society. These include enchanced people become to caring and polite. Firstly, there are number of certain spot such as library, school, and shrine where strictly carried with cellphone restricted. If by chance any individual break to the law then authority responsible give to the punishment and collect to the fine as money. For instance, people feel more annoying and disturbance when others individual talk very loudly, with sometimes people in the middle road stop to the vehicles to doing talk with which more traffic jams and spread the violence.
On the other hand, there is no any doubt that technology along with human lifestyle completely change and more independent for this reason I feel that there are many advantages outweighs disadvantagesuse in public place. Secondly, in current century majority of individual use the cellphone in certain place only show off the status, in this way more inhabitant attract and conduct feel jealous. In additionally, cellphone through people ease communicate with family and friends such as they live in the world any corner. Furthermore, when any worst incident happened in public place then at that time cellphone play a major role, with they more chance enable to help from authority.
In conclusion, I pen down to say that without any doubt technology of completely change the human lifestyles and entertainment sources, however, the gadgets of cellphone use in certain place more create the violence like provide the help when any incident happen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11782477341 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65413658208 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555891238671 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.6850439253 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.307692308 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152967438599 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611387123638 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828724761668 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103210266957 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718740317997 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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