Vaccinating children is not only unnecessary but also dangerous. Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree.
There is a certain downfall in the popularity regarding the vaccination of children. People are of the opinion that vaccination is treacherous and not a necessity as well. This essay will outline the complete necessity of vaccinating children despite the potential hazards.
Parents are fussy towards their siblings and hence they do not want any kind of unwanted substance to be injected in the body of their child. These matter may either cause an illness or any other disease. There are various instances where infants show adverse reactions towards the vaccine. As a result of such instances parents have discarded the thought of inoculating their offspring which may be more hazardous than preventing the disease itself.
Despite the minor drawbacks associated with vaccination, the notion that they are unnecessary and risky is completely vague. The death toll has plummeted after the use of vaccine. Additionally, the immunization has ultimately help to prevent the spread of contagious diseases. A number of disorders have actually been eradicated from the society through the vaccination campaigns. A recent survey revealed that most of the deformities caused by polio could have been prevented during childhood if vaccines were taken. Overall, if the idea of inoculation is neglected by parents the community as a whole will suffer and the outcomes would be worse.
In conclusion, the individuals who are against immunization have flawed the concept of vaccination and underestimate the affects of what they believe. In my opinion, vaccinating children is of utmost importance in spite of the occasional risks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... adverse reactions towards the vaccine. As a result of such instances parents have...
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Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'helped'.
Suggestion: helped
...onally, the immunization has ultimately help to prevent the spread of contagious dis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, hence, if, may, regarding, so, well, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41732283465 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96648775492 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622047244094 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5283838783 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119828993343 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404885660351 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426508668087 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789697888989 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486564155995 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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