Video records are a better way to learn about the way other people in thee world live rather tha written documents TO what extent do you agree or disagree?
in today's modern society, people assume that the better way to learn in the world is through video records rather than written documents. Personally, I believe bot of two methods have equal benefits and drawbacks.
On the one hand, thanks to the develop of technology information, humma may access with an amazing resources for learning. One of the most popular way is learnig through video records. There are aa number of various topics, lessons, which are available on the internet. The learners may find what they want to obtain, improve and enhance via some plaforms such as youtube, short videos on facebook, tiktok, instagram and so on. Those are visual image and audio. Therefore, the learners can have the benefits for entertaining while they are learning. Another point to make is that, people can access to an unlimited source of information to serve all their learning demands. To illustrate, a wide variety english for psychology are available on the internet that meet for a plenty of learnder's perpective.
Om the other hand, most all of valuable learning resources are always obtainable on the internet. Therefore, written documents like books, newsappers, magazines, are still great resouces material. For students in university whenever they conduct their surveys, do their assigments, written documents are still their priority choices. The reason for that is because books are for more reliable compared to video records. They may have more quality content and well researches to produce and publish.
In coclusion, while each way jas its own positive aspects. I believe that combining both of them in people's learning process is more suitable and can fufill all of the learner's needs.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
in todays modern society, people assume th...
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Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...rawbacks. On the one hand, thanks to the develop of technology information, humma may ac...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'resource'?
Suggestion: resource
...ation, humma may access with an amazing resources for learning. One of the most popular w...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 355, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...r priority choices. The reason for that is because books are for more reliable compared to...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...process is more suitable and can fufill all of the learners needs.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, still, therefore, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23272727273 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64242813455 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4814559818 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6470588235 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76470588235 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195174212101 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553640556287 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820895885966 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132621463803 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759510755116 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
in todays modern society, people assume th...
^^
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...rawbacks. On the one hand, thanks to the develop of technology information, humma may ac...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'resource'?
Suggestion: resource
...ation, humma may access with an amazing resources for learning. One of the most popular w...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 355, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...r priority choices. The reason for that is because books are for more reliable compared to...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...process is more suitable and can fufill all of the learners needs.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, still, therefore, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23272727273 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64242813455 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4814559818 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6470588235 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76470588235 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195174212101 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553640556287 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820895885966 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132621463803 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759510755116 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.