Video records are a better way to learn about the way other people in thee world live rather tha written documents TO what extent do you agree or disagree?
However, written documents such as books, magazines, newspapers, and online articles are still excellents sources of learning material. Scientific studies have shown that reading is more effective way of learning compared to watching video, especially when it comes to the retention of specific details of information. Therefore, as an educational tool, reading may in fact be superior. In addition, books are quite often a far more reliable source of information compared to what we may see in a video. Due to the cost and time that it takes to produce, publish an print a book, the content is often we researched and reliable, unlike a lot of content we find in videos on the internet these days.
In conclusion, i do not agree that video is a better way of learning how othrer people in the world live though i do believe that it is an effective learning tool.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, still, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 1615.20841683 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 149.0 315.596192385 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81879194631 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80525673324 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651006711409 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 506.74238477 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8913355664 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.666666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235051497618 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105741561853 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120240303801 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237158567982 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124691619155 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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