Vietnamese society has changed significantly in the past decades. However, many traditional values and practices have been lost, which is a pity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? In about 200 - 250 words, write an essay to support your opinion.
Vietnamese culture has varied considerably recently, which leads to the loss of traditional values as well as customs. While I agree that it’s a pity to slacken our conventional practices, I agree that it’s an ineluctable factor that promotes our country.
On the one hand, I agree that the change of society can result in losing a great many conventional practices. First, our country has adapted to any other country and dissolved our traditional property by reason of integrating into more nations. Second, it is teenagers that are the major elements. To the best of my knowledge, a great number of adolescents have a tendency to learn several languages, but they make use of them inaccurately and inefficiently, which excessively cultivates xenophilia and depreciates our own nation. Lastly, a fraction of people have fully taken advantage of our traditions, yet they have distorted them and made foreigners misconstrue the origin of these traditions.
On the other hand, I’m also of the opinion that the eradication of some cultural identities is an inevitable part in developing our nation. Imagine our country didn’t show our change in any other aspect, what would you think about our economy ? Therefore, we ourselves should break our traditions and absorb in other different countries. Moreover, it is also a good chance to obliterate some superstitious beliefs, which has a negative impact on thousands of lives on Earth.
To summarize, that the change of our society has given rise to the loss of conventional values and practices is highly recommended. However, there are a wide range of disagreements for this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29545454545 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09030109215 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602272727273 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8061896143 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.538461538 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150740524855 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557674196033 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384157049576 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103064676826 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270157478083 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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