Vietnamese society has changed significantly in the past decades. However, many traditional values and practices have been lost, which is a pity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? In about 230 - 250 words, write an essay to support your opinion
Vietnamese society is currently different from it ten years ago as it has changed a lot. There is an argument is that this trend leads to the bad results that traditional values and practices have been lost. I totally disagree with this view for some following reasons.
Initially, the Vietnamese cultures such as clothes, foods, and festivals are protected and remained by both government and individuals. Several disappeared heritages have been recovered by the government for years. Ly Dynasty’s palace, for example, has been planned to rebuild. The main purpose of this is for springs to see how clever and gorgeous their ancestors were and be proud of them. Furthermore, the traditional culture is a crucial part of Vietnam. The young these days widespread their traditional customs to all over the world by adding traditional cultures to their performances on the international stage.
Apart from that, the disappearance of some traditional practices is necessary for modern life. Firstly, some toxic and superstitious beliefs which both negatively influence people and hold back the development of society should be erased. In addition, several traditional practices are not totally bad and formed by the habits and lifestyles through historic development, but it no more appreciate in modern life. So that some proactive measures, such as raising awareness of people, should be adapted to obliterate these customs.
In conclusion, Vietnamese society is changing quickly, the pity of this is that traditional values and practices have been disappeared. However, I believe that some lost traditional customs are good for currently developed lifestyles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49805447471 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0339467325 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583657587549 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0604691036 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219863491105 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789621376552 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868288179768 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166203793133 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960882660776 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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