In the modern world, the scarcity of water has become a heated problem across the world. While i partly agree with the idea that the governing body holds the power to control the water usage, i am firmly of the view that the role of households should be emphasized.
On the one hand, it is obvious that governments should restrict the amount of water their inhabitants use. The population and the demand are increasing and natural resources, especially freshwater, are being used more than any other time in the human history. However, people have been unaware of the devastating effects of this overuse yet. Therefore, the government should play the vital role in controlling the water consumption of people in their country. It is extremely serious for the governments' agenda to control the increasing rate of population growth. Firstly, governments should set out rules such as a protocol to deal with the population explosion. That is the way that China, for example, has recently followed. In particular, China has set the law of limitation on the number of offspring a couple can have. With the restriction on the number of children in each family, China has successfully reduced the rate of population boom, and that has in turn cut down the resulting damages in water provision and and living environment. In addition, the government also need to build water pine systems to encourage citizens to make use of recycled water.
On the other hand, i personally opine that individuals' action should be recognized as a more crucial factor to reduce the water distribution on a larger scale. People need to educate themselves and share with other people about the importance of the reduction of water usage. For instance, after realizing that reduced water consumption can lower individual expenses and time spent acquiring water as well as improve the availability of water for other uses, people can limit their water usage on a daily basis. People awareness is the key of water over-consuming issue compared to compelling people to comply with the strict rules enforced by the governments. No one can deny the fact that it is individual but not anyone else, knows exactly their family's demand for water, in hence, they know clearly which solution can be taken to best fit their family to reduce the use of water.
In conclusion, the current issue of dealing with the water shortage requires necessary actions of both governments and individuals. While there are many solutions to this problem, the role of households in keeping balanced water distribution is indispensable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s the power to control the water usage, i am firmly of the view that the role of ...
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Line 2, column 492, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...ountry. It is extremely serious for the governments agenda to control the increasing rate o...
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Line 2, column 1019, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...he resulting damages in water provision and and living environment. In addition, the go...
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Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...the other hand, i personally opine that individuals action should be recognized as a more c...
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Line 3, column 728, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at it is individual but not anyone else, knows exactly their familys demand for w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2157.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05152224824 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79240395859 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51756440281 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 695.7 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1850081856 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.526315789 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4736842105 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42105263158 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320494788566 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104028159681 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065069186148 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204668987049 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357404387208 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.