We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology.
How do you think it will change in the future?
Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?
It's not a secret that computer technologies have penetrated almost all spheres of society: politics, military, entertainment, education and so on. In my opinion medicine is no exception and moreover I believe that this is the most important area where AI is used.
From second half of the 20th century computer based technology starte its way. Since these years AI developing in geometric progression. For example, in the field of medicin MRI ( Magnetic Resonance Imaging) had revolution by studying the human brain and other internal organs. Moreover, humal also tried to create life support devices which saved amount of lives. As I said before computer technologies are developing in the geometric progression and maybe by 2050 someone who studies this sphere would develope something which can change the picture of the world and treat diseases which is now making people miserable and unable to exist and survive.
Computer technologies bring to the world big opportunities and how without difficulties and drawbacks. This drawbacks are minor and not make a sense. On the other side opportunities that afford us feel freer and not worry about what might happen. Software for tracking gadgets and people or even burglars for example helps us in our daily life. Another example is mechanization of work in order not to pay salaries to real people employees often resort to this method. Furthermore,there are people who want to subjugate everything that can be and rule everything. However, If bad thing happens, all achievements will be destroyed or becomes useless.
The first thing that needs to be sayed is that computer technologies gives us lots of source of information and also benefits whis human use in order to know more, be healthy and become successful. Second of all, you need to know where, in what stage you need to stop and not disaster appear.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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...For example, in the field of medicin MRI Magnetic Resonance Imaging had revolutio...
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Suggestion: These
...how without difficulties and drawbacks. This drawbacks are minor and not make a sens...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun source seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of sources'.
Suggestion: lots of sources
... is that computer technologies gives us lots of source of information and also benefits whis h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09150326797 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83213256023 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637254901961 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5566295296 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.375 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20474875344 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552479725386 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054488519566 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110183899458 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160954141506 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.