Weddings are getting bigger and more expensive what is the reason for this it is a positive or a negative development
It is observed that marriages are becoming lovers and costly. Personally, I feel the main reason for this because it is a symbol of social status. Therefore, I feel it is a negative development. I will articulate it in my upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, there are one main reason why weddings are getting bigger as well as more expensive? The prominent cause is lavish wedding concern as a social symbol of status and rich families also arrange high budget marriage place locations. In other words, high status families show their wealth and prosperity through these kind of weddings. To epitome, many kings and queens also show their wealth through the marriage these kind of wedding show off the wealthy status.
However, it is a negative development firstly, when high rated families arrange the wedding parties, receptions and other functions then they spend a huge amount of money on the arrangements. Apart from that, they spend a lot of money on food and beverages sometimes, these food items are waste because people waste the food and put it into the dustbin which is affect the nature. For instance, 85% individuals die every year who suffer from starvation.
To recapitulate, in my opinion, if weddings becoming lavish and expensive than government also should enact the law related to high budget so that food and money could save.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, i feel, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00442477876 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62626554899 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579646017699 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5313434085 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.25 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206662636169 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723252719999 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925751966255 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104662378426 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328044579029 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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