As well as making money, business also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
It is said that together with making profits, companies also need to have puclic reponsibilities. In my opinion, while generating profit is the top priority of each company, I agree that they should conduct their business their business in a socially responsible manner.
On the one hand, the effort to maximize profits may be beneficial in some ways. Firstly, the higher profits the companies make, the more taxes they are able to pay. For example, taxes such as stamp duties or income tax are useful for the government to clear up social issues in terms of education or health care. Secondly, by earning huge profits, enterprises are likely to reinvest in their business and enlagre the business scale. For instance, firm could use money generating from carrying on business effectively to expand their production system as well as R&D department to enhance the quality of goods.
On the other hand, there are strong reasons why business should make themselves be in charged of social issues. In the present times, enterprises are making the most of the environment and the eco system is being destroyed severely by the action of human beings, especially by companies. Therefore, companies should carry on planning to peotect the environment. For example, instead of discharging chemical waste into rivers, factories should installl waste treatment systems. Secondly, businesses should spend money on charity or scholarship. If they create charity or scholarship fund, they can help the poor turn to new page in life.
In conclusion, although making money is important to companies, I agree that companies should be responsible for social problems as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'their business'.
Suggestion: their business
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... should make themselves be in charged of social issues. In the present times, ent...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y companies. Therefore, companies should carry on planning to peotect the environ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24344569288 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78511200542 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602996254682 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.045752187 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2857142857 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236689296721 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781838231485 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697807967214 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166837145152 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564804961172 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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