As well as making money businesses also have a responsibility towards society To what extent do you agree or disagree

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As well as making money, businesses also have a responsibility towards society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is recommended that firms in modern society not only earn money but also be accountable to social activities. I reinforce my argument that money-making deeds, accompanied with civic participation, should be companies’ liability .

Initially, it is companies’ image, which may be more exposed to the public that leads to higher profits of businesses. That firms actively cooperate with local authorities in boosting charity work as well as other useful activities,indeed,receives prominent attention from media, along with individuals; then people would select their commodities owing to the fact that inhabitants have a tendency to support companies which they are familiar with, resulting in higher sales in the long term. Sun group, by way of illustration, has proven this claim by fostering their charitable projects in rural areas such as donating money to impoverished regions or building solid houses for people affected by floods. By dint of that, they are derived enormous support from individuals that assist them in increasing revenue annually.

Another justification is that communal duties are a shared responsibility for all, including corporations. There is ample evidence that vulnerable groups in modern society are so prone to facing ever-changing issues , namely the increasingly high cost of healthcare services, or lack of education that governments even can not take care thoroughly for each due to the limit of fiscal resources and furthermore if authorities spent too much money just on them and neglect necessary fields, budget deficit would occur and entail severe situation for nation itself. However, businesses and governments can join hands and forge a strong bond, enabling to tackle such problems and fulfill even more communities’ responsibility at a larger level, not to mention the fact that not only can marginalized dwellers be beneficiaries, but social stability is ensured in the long run thanks to this collaboration.

All things considered, I strongly agree with the idea that companies should allocate their responsibility to the society in addition to making money due to their image of public and joint accountability.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, well, in addition, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56626506024 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33349587852 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647590361446 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.947898711 49.4020404114 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.8 106.682146367 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143625379889 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054570743423 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481253197839 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985486515515 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479647605623 0.056905535591 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.7 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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