As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
While I acknowledge that the primary purpose of businesses is trying their best to generate profits, they should also make contributions to social matters within their influence. This essay will shed light on both views before making the final note.
On the one hand, it is understandable that any entrepreneur operates their companies with the aim of creating as much returns as possible. To begin with, every form of a corporation when engaging in the free market always has the same goal which is to achieve a sustainable position in the competitive market and bring benefits to their enterprises. This is because, during the operation of the organization, there are a plethora of expenses including office material or technological equipment that need to be covered. According to the US Small In business Administration, the average cost to establish a business is approximately $3,000, whereas the estimated cost to initiate a home-based franchise is almost $5,000. In addition, not only spend money on planned materials but also face all of the sudden popups, and problems arising in the flavor of conditions. Therefore, they have to foresee and build up an estimated budget in such urgent circumstances. Without being realistic about the startup’s financial flow and debt, the leaders may be unable to operate their companies to overcome the challenging period, especially in the case of getting stuck in heavy debt.
On the other hand, there is no distinction between individuals and enterprises in charge of social responsibility. The first reason springs from the apparent fact that no matter what career you are purchasing, the general role is to devote wholeheartedly to gifted talent, and wisdom with the purpose of doing wonders for human life. This also means that you are making an effort to improve the quality of life, and far beyond for the community. The second lies in when brings a vast amount of value to society, a striking notice that customers certainly feel satisfied with your services as well as appreciate your company’s considerable contributions. As a result, they may play an important role in order to increase brand awareness among other consumers. For instance, the Vietnamese youtube channel “Quang Linh vlogs” has received enthusiastic support from both Vietnamese and Angolas. In the recordings, Linh and his team instruct local Angolas on how to grow vegetables and raise livestock. They proved that it is more humanitarian for businesses o society than to maximize revenue.
In conclusion, although I agree with making money is the top priority for any business, they should also assume their responsibilities in their potential of capability.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...r companies with the aim of creating as much returns as possible. To begin with, eve...
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Line 3, column 632, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...to establish a business is approximately ,000, whereas the estimated cost to initi...
^^
Line 3, column 710, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nitiate a home-based franchise is almost ,000. In addition, not only spend money o...
^^
Line 3, column 786, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE_SUDDEN[1]
Message: This phrase is nonstandard. Did you mean 'all of a sudden'?
Suggestion: all of a sudden
...oney on planned materials but also face all of the sudden popups, and problems arising in the fla...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e first reason springs from the apparent fact that no matter what career you are ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2269.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 431.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26450116009 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04216240097 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 176.041082164 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614849187935 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 716.4 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9453648825 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.055555556 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9444444444 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194264879524 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465911313608 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503538410568 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11823743361 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039466046891 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...r companies with the aim of creating as much returns as possible. To begin with, eve...
^^^^
Line 3, column 632, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...to establish a business is approximately ,000, whereas the estimated cost to initi...
^^
Line 3, column 710, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nitiate a home-based franchise is almost ,000. In addition, not only spend money o...
^^
Line 3, column 786, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE_SUDDEN[1]
Message: This phrase is nonstandard. Did you mean 'all of a sudden'?
Suggestion: all of a sudden
...oney on planned materials but also face all of the sudden popups, and problems arising in the fla...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e first reason springs from the apparent fact that no matter what career you are ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2269.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 431.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26450116009 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04216240097 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 176.041082164 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614849187935 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 716.4 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9453648825 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.055555556 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9444444444 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194264879524 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465911313608 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503538410568 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11823743361 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039466046891 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.