What are the advantages and disadvantages of CCTV cameras to fight crime.
Crimes are increasing at a significant rate in recent times. To tackle this, installation of CCTV cameras is one control measure. However, it has both advantages and disadvantages. In this essay, I will discuss how CCTV cameras can help to fight against crimes, and their drawbacks.
One of the main advantages of installing CCTV cameras is surveillance. These cameras can act as guardians, and can supervise public places such as banks, colleges, and schools etcetera. These cameras can deter criminals to commit crimes in such areas . For example, offenders are very unlikely to commit crimes such as stealing purses or shoplifting in the presence of CCTV surveillance, in fear of being caught. Moreover, CCTV cameras can be used to identify offenders and can provide substantial evidence which could be useful for police to take lawful action against those offenders.
on the other hand, the major disadvantage of CCTV cameras is high cost of installation. in order to install these cameras, large amount of money investment and maintenance required. This expense can be easily affordable by big organisations, while it could be a financial liability to a small scale business. moreover, CCTV camera surveillance could have technological vulnerabilities which could be exploited by people with malicious intentions such as hackers.
In conclusion, it is clear that CCTV cameras have advantages as well as disadvantages. On the one hand, it could deter criminals not to commit crimes and can provide evidence concerned person if required, on the other hand, their high cost of installation and vulnerabilities could be detrimental to society or businesses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43295019157 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15809193426 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.8593577531 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301810496056 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119641317795 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842247027298 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19501800483 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594745762348 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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