What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a big city? Discuss.
Over the past decade, improper urban land use erodes and undermines our opportunity to live in a city. Although living in a big city with high-rises benefits us, it does more harm than good.
There are many reasons why living in outskirt improves our quality of living. First, instead enjoy the wonderful tranquility, the atmospheric pollution is a common sight. For example, vibrations from road drill as well as the density of traffic flow usually disturb our domestic life. Second, house problems are the headache for many urban planners. Those who live in a big city with modest wages have no option except living in coffin home and claustrophobic rooms.
On the other hand, living in big city really brings a lot of advantages to us. First, we have more opportunities to experience a higher quality of life. We can reside in neighborhoods with higher amenities as well as rigid safeguard systems. Second, our children are exposed to high-quality education and they can also attend many after school classes and extracurricular which help them cultivate their innate talents. For example, wealthy families in outskirts have many obstacles in finding an elite and private school to send their children although they are able to finance this education.
Living in a big city does more harm than good because of the pace of the modern life. You should scrutinize where you can settle down before getting married.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hey are able to finance this education. Living in a big city does more harm than...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, really, second, so, well, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03829787234 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66497833984 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625531914894 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.136655145 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5714285714 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203103665479 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743107150134 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104062932538 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132496457782 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266398371802 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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