What are the factors that cause stress and how to cope with stress?
People are becoming more and more hectic over the past few decades. As a result, the number of patients suffering from stress are increasing significantly. This problem is based on many reasons and needed practical solutions
The first thing to mention as one of the major cause is the heavy workload. Overworked people tend to be stressed and have the mental disorders. For instance, when your boss emailed you about an unfinished assignment, your body will instantly activate a fight-or-flight response that make your heart beats faster and the muscle tense. It is detrimental for health and responsible for causing stress. Secondly, stress is resulted in an trauma event such as natural disasters, sexual harassment or domestic violence. Most people go through this kind of events may have acute stress disorder that need time without additional interventions and a good self-care to recover
There are some remedies to cure this illness. Firstly, the patients need a healthy life. They should not be always up to their ears and need to spend time unwinding and recharging their batteries. Alcohols, drugs or other addictive substance is just a depressant which may help reduce the stress in short term but in the long run they may contribute to feeling of depression and anxiety that make stress harder to deal with. The other reason is to see a psychiatrist. Drugs therapy, massage treatment or simply problem-sharing in stead of talking shop are the effective ways to treat stress
To sum up,stress disorder is resulted in overworked or hurtful occasions and can be coped by having a healthy life or seeing the psychiatrist
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...stress. Secondly, stress is resulted in an trauma event such as natural disasters,...
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Message: Did you mean 'instead of'?
Suggestion: instead of
...age treatment or simply problem-sharing in stead of talking shop are the effective ways to ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , stress
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, in short, kind of, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10447761194 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82951724765 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64552238806 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5741019574 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.230769231 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241119872283 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772293664686 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723200208606 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132420367376 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390481962952 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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