When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
According to the statement,salary is important and it should be considerable. i agree with the aurgument,but
job satisfaction is also more important for future scope and to gain our promotion.so now the explaination
will be explained in paragraph.
firstly choosing a job, salary is important for a person to survive and for his daily needs whereas he should take care of his own
family with the particular expense amount,due to this covid 19 we find many people getting their income less than before,so they started framing
budgets in the pandamic time.a reputed companey and a good salary makes visible of the persons personality in public.some people gets insentive
on their working organisation where they make ideas and save them for future plans.
secondly salary is considarable but job satisfaction makes the job more intresting and to develop their organisation in easier way.satisfied jobs
will be done in less stress and people enjoy by working the job for eg. a graphic desingner cannot work as a team manager which make him
inapropriate and uncomfortable. consequently we find people getting high salary with job satisfaction which gives a beautiful carear path for
his life
To conclude salary is considarable according to their family needs but job satisfaction is more important to get a great scop on their career
finally by satisfied jobs can even grow in heights.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-10-26 | Trần Ánh Vy | 78 | view |
| 2024-10-21 | aceg1000 | 73 | view |
| 2024-10-19 | vidung | 90 | view |
| 2024-10-19 | Tuan Harry | 11 | view |
| 2024-10-19 | Tuan Harry | 11 | view |
- Some people believe that children s leisure activities must be educational otherwise they are a complete waste of time Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience 80
- Some people think air travel has more negative impacts than positive impacts on modern life What do you think 79
- The time people devote in job leaves very little time for personal life How widespread is the problem What problem will this shortage of time cause 65
- The government should invest more money in science education rather than other subjects to develop the country To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 77
- Effective learning requires time comfort and peace so it is impossible to combine study and employment study and employment distract one from another to what extent do you think the statements are realistic support your opinion with examples 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , salary
According to the statement,salary is important and it should be considera...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...mportant and it should be considerable. i agree with the aurgument,but job sati...
^
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...mportant and it should be considerable. i agree with the aurgument,but job sati...
^
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...considerable. i agree with the aurgument,but job satisfaction is also more importa...
^^^^
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iderable. i agree with the aurgument,but job satisfaction is also more important ...
^^^
Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in our promotion.so now the explaination will be explained in paragraph. fir...
^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
... will be explained in paragraph. firstly choosing a job, salary is important for...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s whereas he should take care of his own family with the particular expense amoun...
^^^
Line 7, column 42, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , due
...amily with the particular expense amount,due to this covid 19 we find many people ge...
^^^^
Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...le getting their income less than before,so they started framing budgets in the pa...
^^^
Line 8, column 88, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... and a good salary makes visible of the persons personality in public.some people gets ...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ity in public.some people gets insentive on their working organisation where they...
^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...deas and save them for future plans. secondly salary is considarable but job satisfac...
^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 33, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consequently
...ke him inapropriate and uncomfortable. consequently we find people getting high salary with...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 33, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: consequently,
...ke him inapropriate and uncomfortable. consequently we find people getting high salary with...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... which gives a beautiful carear path for his life To conclude salary is con...
^^^
Line 14, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s a beautiful carear path for his life To conclude salary is considarable accor...
^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tant to get a great scop on their career finally by satisfied jobs can even grow ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28444444444 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07968252332 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582222222222 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.310047179 49.4020404114 298% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 198.166666667 106.682146367 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.5 20.7667163134 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8333333333 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165600280856 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922918574689 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453545724139 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668833723167 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532463250106 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.2 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.