When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People’s opinions differ regarding whether the wage is the major factor when deciding to pursue a job. While it is obvious that salary is an optimum consideration to some extent, I still believe that there are a variety of other crucial parts.
The wage is indeed a necessary factor that we need to scrutinize when choosing a job for various reasons. For life aspects, a high salary assists us to make an expense of living, pay bills and meet our needs in life such as housing, health care, education, and transportation. For example, individuals who get a well-paid job can offer for themselves luxury and sufficient life, or even they might have better judgments from others about their position in society. In addition, getting a well-paid job also contributes to promoting our motivation and productivity at work. If a person chooses jobs based on pleasure or non-finance factors, they might feel the obstacle to survive in some cases and it is quite difficult for them to go along with that work for a long term.
On the other hand, I still believe that there are a plethora of vital elements we need to consider when opting for our profession. The first one is our satisfaction and passion for the jobs that we are pursuing. My sister, for instance, is currently a dedicated doctor, by doing what she loves, she is more inclined to try her best to cure patients’ diseases as much as possible. Furthermore, when choosing jobs the importance of a positive and productive office atmosphere and having harmonious relationships with colleagues is just as crucial as wages. This might increase the level of happiness among staff, ultimately benefiting the firms as a whole.
In conclusion, while it is no doubt that the salary is a crucial aspect of people’s consideration of a profession, I believe that other elements are equally significant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92971246006 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91472224283 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591054313099 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.745801914 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.692307692 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5384615385 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196570932221 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678235610389 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447693374137 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118887120392 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328325285917 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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