In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In recent years, the rate of individuals who choose to live a lonely life is increasing significantly in some nations. While this growing trend is disadvantageous to some extent, I would argue that it is positive progress.
There are several reasons why living in a one-person household can be seen as a negative aspect to individuals. Firstly, people living alone will have to make their own cost of living and pay numerous bills. For example, they must be bear the weight of household expenditures, travel, meals, electricity; therefore increasing the feelings of pressure, worry and isolation, or even they might become a financial burden to their family. Secondly, living alone will result in loneliness and people might miss out on the emotional support from their family or flatmates. Instead, staying with another person will not lead to the adverse consequences mentioned above and we will be able to relieve some of the tension in our hectic lives.
On the other hand, I would argue that people who choose to live alone experience numerous benefits from a freedom life. The first is that a solitary person may become more self-reliant and assertive than those residing with their family. For instance, a young adult who lives alone will need to learn how to cook, clean, self-care and especially manage his or her own budget, which are extremely valuable life skills, and this contributes to improved quality of life and starting a family later on. In addition, from an economic perspective, the demand for accommodation would considerably increase, which leads to a plethora of positive impacts on the construction industry, estate agents and eventually prospering the nation as a whole.
In summary, while there are some drawbacks to the rise in one-person households, I personally believe that this growing trend is far more beneficial.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 693, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15946843854 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87079716514 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591362126246 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.8844746313 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.416666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209149419793 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079077978937 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438069138024 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1258193091 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263629116481 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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