When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the
building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that during the process of constructing a building, the ultimate purpose of using it should be prioritized instead of the overall appearance. In my opinion, I disagree with this statement as the intended objective and outward look of a block are equally important.
On the one hand, the intended purpose of a building might largely orient the whole construction process. Firstly, how a building would be used will be the decisive factor for its overall structure and materials. In other words, different kinds of buildings with specific purposes such as work, entertainment, or accommodation would require distinct structure to meet the demand of citizen. For example, a building built for recreation use would have several parts constructed creatively, while an apartment would merely be the same rooms put together. Secondly, the location of a building will also largely be decided by its construction purpose. If a building is located at a place which does not facilitate its intended use, the expected effective operation might not be achieved.
On the other hand, attractive appearance is also an important element that should be taken into account when a building is put into use. One reason is that the unique and outstanding outlook of a building would grasp the attention of people. This applies particularly to highrise apartments in city, where residents have the tendency to settle in blocks with modern and fancy outlook. Another factor why a building's appearance is crucial is that it somehow reflects the cultural distinction and traditional features of a certain city or country to visitors. For instance, the 81-storey building constructed recently in Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam, is designed in the shape of bamboo tree, whose features are closely related to Vietnamese glorious history and long-lasting customs.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the intended use and appearance play an equal role in designing a building, and therefore, the constructors should carefully consider these factors to create an impressive architectural work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 407, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'buildings'' or 'building's'?
Suggestion: buildings'; building's
...and fancy outlook. Another factor why a buildings appearance is crucial is that it someho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33636363636 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00125624141 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581818181818 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.250301051 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.785714286 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2142857143 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145967841055 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524006598547 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420928993135 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102432456573 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350870085578 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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