When people live in a foreign country, they should follow local traditions and customs. Do you agree or not?
In light of the mounting importance of cultural integration in the era of globalization, the question of how national cultural identity can be preserved has been a topic of public interest lately. One common proposal that many people, myself included, advocated is that foreigners visiting the nation should adhere indigenous customs.
Opponents of adhering to local culture often cite the fact that national identity, which should not be altered by the environment, is of paramount importance to each citizen. Nonetheless, this thinking fails to factor in cultural integration, as evidenced by the fact that several oversea tourists without knowledge about native culture when traveling to a foreign country have to face many challenges. That being the case, they may unintentionally commit acts that break the nation’s law. This is why we need to follow regional traditions to avoid unexpected circumstances.
What is more, the insight of indigenous customs not only creates memorable experiences but also is a method that helps us improve our communication skills with international friends. Through these interactions, we also can propagate our country’s traditional culture to others. Therefore, if we ignore the nation’s traditions, not only will opportunities for cultural exchange be restricted but the image of our country will also be adversely affected. This can be seen in that it is rude if you preempt when shopping in Japan, making your country’s reputation worse in Japanese’s eyes.This is a testament to the importance of conforming regional norms.
In a nutshell, I strongly support the belief that it is essential to respect the native culture when traveling abroad, considering the significant contributions that promote cross-cultural interaction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nonetheless, so, therefore, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60740740741 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24200821775 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5430711025 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.636363636 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157097548956 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575900853831 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303964103442 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821805261445 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471332927895 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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